Plot: An assortment of personal poems – love and hate, sometimes together.
I had two versions available to me for Catullus : the Penguin classic translated by Peter Whigham (0140441808) and the Oxford World’s Classics edition by Guy Lee (0192835874)
My thoughts:
I must confess I am not a poetry fan – and the more self-indulgent and ugly the poems, the less I like them. So Catullus does not rate highly with me and I was glad to reach the last page.
Catullus is reminiscent of Sappho, in that he uses his poetry very personally to express his love, lust, anger and hate, to praise his friends and to attack his enemies. His surviving poems are numbered (with some gaps) and organised by length and style, so each poem is different from the next, and the recurrent themes (his love for ‘Lesbia’ and their turbulent affair, his dalliances with other male and female lovers, his insults and his occasional poetic correspondence to friends) are mixed throughout the volume.
Perhaps most memorable are his addresses to “Lesbia” (the Clodia attacked so scathingly by Cicero in court for her promiscuity). Catullus’ feelings for her vary from deep love, to sniping insults at her and her other lovers, to recognising he cannot help but love and hate her, desperately wishing he could rid her from his system.
With two editions to compare, it becomes very apparent that an especially beautiful phrase that captures my heart is as much courtesy of the translator as the author : compare Catullus’ ode (#4) to his favourite yacht now beached and decaying on the bank:
“drawn up here, gathering quiet age” (Whigham) versus “grows old in quiet retirement” (Lee)
Both are beautiful but Whigham manages to capture something special.
As I have said before, without my own knowledge of the ancient languages, I am reliant on the skill, accuracy and fidelity of the translator; and personal taste also comes into play. Especially with Catullus’ ‘colourful’ language such as on display in #6
“attenuated thighs betray your preoccupation” (Whigham) versus the “fucked-out flanks” (Lee)
There is a small number of short epic-like poems but they lost me. The highly considered #64 starts as a marriage celebration but was overshadowed by jarring tales of death and betrayal from Greek legends : Ariadne abandoned by Theseus after she helps him kill the minotaur, the deaths and destruction during the Fall of Troy, and the unhappy tale of Oedipus.
Favourite lines/passages:
I have reproduced Whigham’s translations of poems 32, 33 and 51 below; not as favourites but to give some idea of what is representative of Catullus
XXXII
Call me to you
at siesta
We’ll make love
my gold & jewels
my treasure trove
my sweet Ipsithila
When you invite
me lock no doors
nor change your mind
& step outside
But stay at home
& in your room
prepare yourself
To come nine times
straight off together
In fact if you
should want it now
I’ll come at once
for lolling on
the sofa here
with jutting cock
and stuffed with food
I’m ripe for stuffing you
My sweet Ipsithila.
LI
Godlike the man who
sits at her side, who
watches and catches
that laughter
which softly tears me
to tatters, nothing is
left of me, each time
I see her.
… tongue numbed; arms, legs
melting, on fire ; drum
drumming in my ears ; head-
lights gone black.
Her ease is your sloth, Catullus
You itch & roll in her ease
Former kings and cities
Lost in the valley of her arm
XXXIII
Vibennius & son, renowned
among bath-hut pilferers
pere
an adept at massage
fils
of voracious if of hirsute buttocks
why not remove yourselves?
Those manual depredations
are common knowledge
the allurements of those bum-cheeks
a drug on the market
why not remove yourselves?
Personal rating: 3/10
The reads in between:
- Death comes as the End : Agatha Christie sets this murder whodunnit in Ancient Egypt around 2000 BC. For once I was well on top of the murderer, but since so many got knocked off along the way, there were not many suspects left to choose from. 😊
- The Martian : Andy Weir’s first novel describes the survival efforts of an astronaut left behind on Mars, and the rescue options NASA comes up with. Saw the movie last year. Looking forward to getting his next book Artemis about a bank heist on the Moon.
- Mike : Another early Wodehouse about cricket and private schools. Entertaining if you love … well, Wodehouse or cricket.
Next : Selected letters from Cicero.
To my surprise, I rather like LI…
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I did pick the ones that stood out for different reasons. LI and IV (the yacht) did have a nice turn of phrase
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